I Don't Like A Rainy Day--Draft Two

I Don't Like A Rainy Day--Draft Two

I don't like a rainy day because it makes my life very inconvenient. First, it is quite dangerous to go outside for the eyesight is so bad that people can't see things clearly. Many car accidents happen in a rainy day. Second, if I have to go out, I must wear the raincoat. It is very hot and uncomfortable ,and I still am able to get wet. Besides, I need to leave early to avoid stuffing in the traffic jam and being late. Third,the price of the vegetables will be more expensive than before. I don't like rainy days as it brings a lot of things which are not good. And many accidents ,for example flood,car accident,mudflows and landslides ,and so on ,happen in a rainy day. So a rainy day is a bad day. The more important is that it is easy to become ill in a rainy day because of a change in the weather. I will keep having a running nose. Therefore, I don't like a rainy day.

I Don't Like A Rainy Day--Draft One

I Don't Like a Rainy Day--Draft One

I don't like rainy day because it makes my life very inconvenient. First, it is quite dangerous to go outside for the eyesight is so bad that people can see things clearly. Second, if I have to go out, I must wear the raincoat even if I still am able to get wet. Besides, I need to leave early to avoid stuffing in the traffic jam. The more important is that the price of the vegetable will be more expensive than before.
I don't like a rainy day as it brings a lot of things which are not good. And many traffic accidents happened in a rainy days. So rainy days are bad day.

An Unforgettable Experience--Draft Two

An Unforgettable Experience--Draft Two
It was a very common day, and everything is the same as before. I just became a new student of senior high school, playing all day and meeting new friends. Our school took place a English speeching contest. One is voluntary,and the other is drawing of lots. Although the English teacher had already asked all of us to practice the lessons in English book ,I didn't put it in my mind. The next day, it was proved that "seven" is a lucky number, honestly. I was drew. I felt very nervous because I didn't prepare for it. When it turned to me, I walked very slowly to the stage. I almost cried; however, I gulped back my tears. I stammered out reading the whole lesson. I knew that I didn't do well , but my classmates were all very support me. Lastly I won the sixth prize in the contest. It is really an unforgettable experience, isn't it?

An Unforgettable Experience--Draft One

An Unforgettable Experience--Draft One

It was a very common day that everything is the same as before. I just became a new student of senior high school, playing all day and meeting new friends. Our school takes place a English speeching contest. One is voluntary,and the other is drawing of lots. Although the English teacher had already asked all of us to practice the lessons in English book ,I didn't put it in my mind. The next day, it was proved that "seven" is a lucky number, honestly. I was drew, and I felt very nervous for I prepared for nothing. When I went up onto the platform, I almost cried out. I stammered out reading the lesson. I knew that I didn't do well , but my classmates were all very support me. It is an unforgattable experience, isn't it?

A Dream I Had -- Draft Two

A DreamＩHad --Draft Two

Most people must have many dreams in their lives. Some of them are very real ; the others are visionary. One day, I was very tired, so I fell asleep immediately. Suddenly, I found that I was in a park where there was a cottage. I was very scared and helpless on account of not knowing where I was. I began to crying loudly, hoping somebody to help me. Then I saw a white dog walking to me with friendly smile. The dog, whose name is Snoopy, took me to the cottage and gave me something to eat. He told me that I entered the cartons' world afterward. I took a break before he introduced me to his friends. We played together happily. All of a sudden, I fell into a deep hole ,and then I woke up.

I think that I want to make a lot of friends and have lots of fun all day in subconsciousness. I am happy to meet Snoopy in the dream and I hope that he could come into my dream again.

A Dream I Had--Draft One

A Dream I Had -- Draft One

Most people must have many dreams in their lives. Some of them are very real ; the others are visionary. One day, I was very tired, so I fell asleep immdeiately. Suddenly, I found that I was in a park where there was a cottage. I was very scared due to not knowing where I was. Then I saw a white dog walking to me with friendly smile. The dog, whose name is Snoopy, took me to the cottage and gave me something to eat. After taking a break, it introduced me to his friends and we played together happily. All of a sudden, I fell into a deep hole ,and then I woke up.
I think that I want to make a lot of friends and have lots fun all day in subconsciousness.

Making Decisions--Draft Two

Making Decisions--Draft Two
Growing up means making my own decisions. For the fact that it is not easy to make good decisions. When I was a child, I was too young to discern what is right and what is wrong. But now, I am not the simple and unaffected little girl any longer. I am old enough to be responsible for the decision that I make. Furthermore, I don't count on other people too much, because I have become more and more independence. Therefore, I should start to make my own decision and account for the decision.

The hardest decision that I ever made was to decide whether I should straddle the department of commercial pursuits or not. Due to the fact I major in the department of applied foreign language now,and I am not very interested in it. But if I straddle the department of commercial pursuits, I will have to go to cram school and spend more time on studying than others. However, I get more sense of achievement from it. Therefore, I decided to straddle the department of commercial pursuits. I will study harder and never regret.