A Dream I Had -- Draft Two

A DreamＩHad --Draft Two

Most people must have many dreams in their lives. Some of them are very real ; the others are visionary. One day, I was very tired, so I fell asleep immediately. Suddenly, I found that I was in a park where there was a cottage. I was very scared and helpless on account of not knowing where I was. I began to crying loudly, hoping somebody to help me. Then I saw a white dog walking to me with friendly smile. The dog, whose name is Snoopy, took me to the cottage and gave me something to eat. He told me that I entered the cartons' world afterward. I took a break before he introduced me to his friends. We played together happily. All of a sudden, I fell into a deep hole ,and then I woke up.

I think that I want to make a lot of friends and have lots of fun all day in subconsciousness. I am happy to meet Snoopy in the dream and I hope that he could come into my dream again.

A Dream I Had--Draft One

A Dream I Had -- Draft One

Most people must have many dreams in their lives. Some of them are very real ; the others are visionary. One day, I was very tired, so I fell asleep immdeiately. Suddenly, I found that I was in a park where there was a cottage. I was very scared due to not knowing where I was. Then I saw a white dog walking to me with friendly smile. The dog, whose name is Snoopy, took me to the cottage and gave me something to eat. After taking a break, it introduced me to his friends and we played together happily. All of a sudden, I fell into a deep hole ,and then I woke up.
I think that I want to make a lot of friends and have lots fun all day in subconsciousness.