A Dream I Had--Draft One
A Dream I Had -- Draft One
Most people must have many dreams in their lives. Some of them are very real ; the others are visionary. One day, I was very tired, so I fell asleep immdeiately. Suddenly, I found that I was in a park where there was a cottage. I was very scared due to not knowing where I was. Then I saw a white dog walking to me with friendly smile. The dog, whose name is Snoopy, took me to the cottage and gave me something to eat. After taking a break, it introduced me to his friends and we played together happily. All of a sudden, I fell into a deep hole ,and then I woke up.I think that I want to make a lot of friends and have lots fun all day in subconsciousness.
posted by 美萱 at 8:47 AM
6 Comments:
I thought it was a terrible dream at first.
After taking a break, it introduced me to his friends and we... >>>it 是不是用 he or she 來代替會比較好
Wow! Snoopy is in your dream!
I think it is funny!
"One day, I was very tired, so I fell asleep immdeiately." "immdeiately" should change to "immediately".
After your dreaming. I think you 're happy because you can play with snoopy and his friends.I want to make a dream with snoopy .
Wow you met Snoopy.
It sounds very interesting.
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