Wednesday, April 11, 2007

Autobiography(Part One)--Draft One

Autobiography (Part One)--Draft One
On the day of October 24th, 1989, a little lovely baby was born . That’s me. My name is Mei-Xuan,Lee, a sixteen-year-old girl. There are five members in my family. My father is a worker and my mother is a housewife. When I was a child, my parents paid a lot of attention to take care of my health because I’m a premature baby. But while I was 12 or 13 years old, I often thought my mother put more emphasis on my brothers. Because she often asked me to do much housework, but my brothers didn't. Therefore, I learned how to cook and how to do the housework well. She also cares about my schoolwork. On the other hand, my father seldom reproves me,besides doting on me. So I’m a little willful. My brothers often played a joke on me and let me become angry. Nevertheless, after falling out, we still played together happily. That's why I become more intelligent. I learn a lot from them ,and I am glad that they are my families.

I enjoy taking a walk after eating dinner. It can help me to digest the meal and think about some things. Sometimes my family will come together, so we chat about TV programs or funny things happened in my school. But most of the time we just take a walk and relax. Furthermore, I also like to read some extracurricular books ,such as newspaper etc,to improve my knowledge.

7 Comments:

Blogger Fanny said...

"and I am glad that they are my families."
maybe you can change into
"and I am glad that they are my family."

4:18 AM  
Blogger 娜娜 said...

To take a walk with your family is blest.

3:59 AM  
Blogger Phoebe Lee said...

Your article is good!

You were a lovely baby, and you are a cute girl now!!!

5:21 AM  
Blogger Jenny said...

"Furthermore, I also like to read some extracurricular books ,such as newspaper etc,to improve my knowledge." I think "Furthermore, I also like to read some extracurricular books ,such as newspaper etc.They can improve my knowledge." is better.

7:19 AM  
Blogger  said...

Your family is sweety.I like it.

6:19 AM  
Blogger Dora said...

"Mei-Xuan,Lee" change to "Mei-Xuan Lee" is better.

8:04 PM  
Blogger candy said...

It's a good time to take a walk with your family .

3:03 AM  

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