Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Autobiography (Part Two)--Draft One

Autobiography (Part Two)--Draft One
During the junior high school, I had been a section chief of affair since the fourth semester. It was a hard job, because I had to be very careful when I gathered money. I decided not to be a section chief of affair anymore. After the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High Schools in July, I was admitted to National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I major in the Department of Applied Foreign Language. All our subjects count on English skills, which are writing, listening, reading and speaking. In the first year, my result of the study was not bad. I was always on the top five of my class. After that my grades become a little worse, because the courses become more difficult. Our class won the third price of the English song competition and school anthem contest. We also did a good job in the athletic meeting. When I was a second grader, our class took part in the English drama competition. We spent a lot of time and energy on it. Finally, we certainly succeed. I am really happy to admit the school and the Department of Applied Foreign Language 2B.
I didn't do well on my Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High Schools. And since I became a second grades of student, my grades become worse and worse. But after graduating, I hope that I can enter a good university. From now on, I have to study harder and harder. And I except that I can use me time more streamlined.

7 Comments:

Blogger Phoebe Lee said...

"Our class won the third price of the English song competition and school anthem contest."前面可以加"Besides",因為功課和競賽是不同方面的。

7:32 PM  
Blogger Jenny said...

"I became a second grades of student, my grades become worse and worse.""grades" "s" should be erase.

7:38 PM  
Blogger Dora said...

"And since I became a second grades of student, my grades become worse and worse."
The "become" should change to "became".

7:44 PM  
Blogger 娜娜 said...

*And I except that I can use me time more streamlined* should change to *And I except that I can use my time more streamlined*

7:54 PM  
Blogger candy said...

Just do your best to let your dream come true.

7:59 PM  
Blogger  said...

"After that my grades become a little worse, because the courses become more difficult."After that後最好有斷句。
You can do it very well.

8:16 PM  
Blogger Fanny said...

Nothing is impossible to willing mind

4:49 AM  

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