Sunday, October 07, 2007

An Unforgettable Experience--Draft One

An Unforgettable Experience--Draft One
It was a very common day that everything is the same as before. I just became a new student of senior high school, playing all day and meeting new friends. Our school takes place a English speeching contest. One is voluntary,and the other is drawing of lots. Although the English teacher had already asked all of us to practice the lessons in English book ,I didn't put it in my mind. The next day, it was proved that "seven" is a lucky number, honestly. I was drew, and I felt very nervous for I prepared for nothing. When I went up onto the platform, I almost cried out. I stammered out reading the lesson. I knew that I didn't do well , but my classmates were all very support me. It is an unforgattable experience, isn't it?

4 Comments:

Blogger Fanny said...

 前後時態要注意’

5:57 PM  
Blogger 娜娜 said...

be動詞要注意
時態也是

1:05 AM  
Blogger Dora said...

"Our school takes place a English speeching contest." Should change to "Our school took place an English speeching contest."

unforgattable-->unforgettable

2:36 AM  
Blogger Phoebe Lee said...

ExperienceIt was a very common day that everything is the same as before.→"that"改用",and"好像比較順

7:12 AM  

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